Talk:The Law Of The Jungle: Difference between revisions
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''"Pay attention son... | ''"Pay attention son... | ||
''this is the part of the story that's really important. Now ''this'' is 'The law of the jungle'... as old and as true as the sky. The wolf that shall keep it, may prosper. | ''this is the part of the story that's really important. Now '''''this''''', is 'The law of the jungle'... as old and as true as the sky. The wolf that shall keep it, may prosper. | ||
''But the wolf that shall break it, must die. | ''But the wolf that shall break it, must die. | ||
''As the creeper that girdles the tree trunk. The law that runs''(I heard "runs", as "run-eth.") | ''As the creeper that girdles the tree trunk. The law that runs'' (I heard "runs", as "run-eth.") ''forward and back. | ||
''For the strength of the pack, is the wolf. | ''For the strength of the pack, is the wolf. | ||
Revision as of 21:17, May 24, 2013
I think it should just be The Law of the Jungle? Always use the DMR. This is craZboy557, signing off. 19:40, 23 May 2013 (EDT)
- I think you're right. --Porplemontage (talk) 22:26, 23 May 2013 (EDT)
So Frank put in the narration, and I agree, the punctuation seems.... off. However, I'm not certain how we would do it, so I figured I'd post a rough idea of what we could do. This is going to be shitty, but it's a start.
"Pay attention son...
this is the part of the story that's really important. Now this, is 'The law of the jungle'... as old and as true as the sky. The wolf that shall keep it, may prosper.
But the wolf that shall break it, must die.
As the creeper that girdles the tree trunk. The law that runs (I heard "runs", as "run-eth.") forward and back.
For the strength of the pack, is the wolf.
And the strength of the wolf...
is the pack."
So that's my first idea. I'm sure someone could think of something better, but it's a start. Always use the DMR. This is craZboy557, signing off. 21:12, 24 May 2013 (EDT)