User:Dante the Ghost/Sandbox: Difference between revisions

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''Fade in to a view of the twin Martian moons, [[Phobos]] and Deimos, and the gaping hole left by Mars' absence. Piloting their ship, the Guardian arrives within the local orbit of Deimos.''

:'''Commander [[Zavala]]''': The discovery of these "[[Forum:Shadowkeeper|Shadowkeeper]]s" and their connection to the Darkness is a breakthrough. [[Eris Morn]] is working with [[Ikora Rey]] to form a plan to address this, and I believe they will see this through~~... assuming they don't kill each other~~. In the meantime, the Hidden are investigating the activities of the Cabal. The loss of their planet, Mars to the Black Fleet is worrisome. More intelligence is required.

:'''Commander [[Zavala]]''': The discovery of these "[[Forum:Shadowkeeper|Shadowkeeper]]s" and their connection to the Darkness is a breakthrough. [[Eris Morn]] is working with [[Ikora Rey]] to form a plan to address this, and I believe they will see this through. In the meantime, the Hidden are investigating the activities of the Cabal. The loss of their planet, Mars to the Black Fleet is worrisome. More intelligence is required.

:'''[[The Ghost|Ghost]]''': "something something"

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 ''Fade in to a view of the twin Martian moons, [[Phobos]] and Deimos, and the gaping hole left by Mars' absence. Piloting their ship, the Guardian arrives within the local orbit of Deimos.''
-:'''Commander [[Zavala]]''': The discovery of these "[[Forum:Shadowkeeper|Shadowkeeper]]s" and their connection to the Darkness is a breakthrough. [[Eris Morn]] is working with [[Ikora Rey]] to form a plan to address this, and I believe they will see this through... assuming they don't kill each other. In the meantime, the Hidden are investigating the activities of the Cabal. The loss of their planet, Mars to the Black Fleet is worrisome. More intelligence is required.
+:'''Commander [[Zavala]]''': The discovery of these "[[Forum:Shadowkeeper|Shadowkeeper]]s" and their connection to the Darkness is a breakthrough. [[Eris Morn]] is working with [[Ikora Rey]] to form a plan to address this, and I believe they will see this through. In the meantime, the Hidden are investigating the activities of the Cabal. The loss of their planet, Mars to the Black Fleet is worrisome. More intelligence is required.
 :'''[[The Ghost|Ghost]]''': "something something"