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== Removal of edit ==

From what I can tell, your edit was removed because it contained [[Destinypedia:Manual_of_Style#Do_not_use_conversational_style|second-person writing]], which isn't up to our standards. If you would like to re-add the edit and rewrite it to those standards, it will be allowed to stay. We welcome all contributions.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}} 12:08, 11 November 2016 (EST)

~~From what~~ I ~~can tell~~, your ~~edit was removed because it contained~~ [[Destinypedia:~~Manual_of_Style#Do_not_use_conversational_style|second-person writing~~]]~~, which isn't up to our standards~~. If you ~~would like to re-add the edit and rewrite it to those standards~~, it will be ~~allowed~~ to ~~stay. We welcome all contributions~~.--{{User:~~Spartacus/Sig}} 12~~:08, 11 November 2016 (EST)

== Suggestions ==

Hey there. I noticed you've added some content to the Archon's Forge that could use a little tweaking and keep most of it in there. As Spartacus has said, your original contributions did not live up to our standards. I've taken the liberty to add your edits to the [[Destinypedia:Sandbox]] along with how I or another user here would have written it. If you need any more advice, or help, myself, [[User:Arcmind|Arcmind]], or [[User:Spartacus|Spartacus]] will be happy to help. --[[User:Dante the Ghost|Dante the Ghost]] ([[User talk:Dante the Ghost|talk]]) 13:14, 11 November 2016 (EST)

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 == Removal of edit ==
+From what I can tell, your edit was removed because it contained [[Destinypedia:Manual_of_Style#Do_not_use_conversational_style|second-person writing]], which isn't up to our standards. If you would like to re-add the edit and rewrite it to those standards, it will be allowed to stay. We welcome all contributions.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}} 12:08, 11 November 2016 (EST)
-From what I can tell, your edit was removed because it contained [[Destinypedia:Manual_of_Style#Do_not_use_conversational_style|second-person writing]], which isn't up to our standards. If you would like to re-add the edit and rewrite it to those standards, it will be allowed to stay. We welcome all contributions.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}} 12:08, 11 November 2016 (EST)
+== Suggestions ==
+Hey there. I noticed you've added some content to the Archon's Forge that could use a little tweaking and keep most of it in there. As Spartacus has said, your original contributions did not live up to our standards. I've taken the liberty to add your edits to the [[Destinypedia:Sandbox]] along with how I or another user here would have written it. If you need any more advice, or help, myself, [[User:Arcmind|Arcmind]], or [[User:Spartacus|Spartacus]] will be happy to help. --[[User:Dante the Ghost|Dante the Ghost]] ([[User talk:Dante the Ghost|talk]]) 13:14, 11 November 2016 (EST)