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:Oh. I didn't see this. Sorry, I should've asked opinions here before I imposed my views on everyone. o.o | :Oh. I didn't see this. Sorry, I should've asked opinions here before I imposed my views on everyone. o.o | ||
:Is it alright? Is there any way to improve? I've mostly used the same punctuation as in the [[wikipedia:The Law of the Jungle|poem]], and used the same layout for trailers. Though I've tried to convey his intonation, etc., feel free to change it if it doesn't do this as well as it should. Sorry about that. :P --{{User:TentacleTornado/Sig}} 12:03, 25 May 2013 (EDT) | :Is it alright? Is there any way to improve? I've mostly used the same punctuation as in the [[wikipedia:The Law of the Jungle|poem]], and used the same layout for trailers. Though I've tried to convey his intonation, etc., feel free to change it if it doesn't do this as well as it should. Sorry about that. :P --{{User:TentacleTornado/Sig}} 12:03, 25 May 2013 (EDT) | ||
::It's cool, you did well. The main roadblock for me is that I'm not sure how to show the longer pauses. In my draft there I went down a line to show it, but I'm not sure if that's acceptable for the wiki. Is there like a punctuation mark that shows that? And obviously I mean one other than a comma or a ... | |||
::Always use the DMR. '''This is''' [[User:CraZboy557|<span style="color:orange; font-family: Gill Sans Ultra Bold; font-size: 105%;">'''craZboy557'''</span>]], '''signing off.''' 12:58, 25 May 2013 (EDT) | |||