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Ravager (edit)

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Added punctuation, corrected "cauldron" into "censer", rewrote almost the entire page yet kept the original author intent. Removed sentence about Ravagers having only a single pair of arms, had to look very closely and confirm they have DO Dreg stumps.

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-|weapon(s)= [[Flame Cauldron]]
+|weapon(s)= [[Flame Censer]]
 |abilities= Rapid Movement <br> Censer Burn
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-'''Ravagers''' are a class of melee-focused [[Scorn]] <ref>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9u4oyarcc4I</ref>.
+'''Ravagers''' are a class of melee-focused [[Scorn]].<ref>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9u4oyarcc4I</ref>.
 ==Overview==
-Ravagers wield [[Flame Cauldron|fiery censers]] as weapons, flailing them wildly as they charge their enemies.
+Ravagers wield [[Flame Censer|flaming censers]] as weapons, charging their foes head-on before slamming their censer into the ground—causing an explosion that leaves a lingering pool of fire which inflicts damage to all enemies caught within its range.
-Disturbingly, Ravagers appear to lack heads, instead having a metal cap covering the stump of their neck. They also only have only one pair of arms.
+Much like [[Abomination|Abominations]], Ravagers appear to lack heads—instead having a metal cap firmly affixed to the stump of their neck.
-In battle, their cauldron weapons can also be their weakness. Should a sharp-eyed Guardian destroy it then the cauldron will explode, killing the Ravager and any nearby enemies. If the Ravager is killed first, the cauldron will still remain on the ground and can be shot to explode, destroying nearby enemies who might come near it.
+In battle, their censer weapons are a strategic weakness. Targeting the fiery head of the censer will cause an explosion, killing the Ravager and damaging nearby enemies. If the Ravager is killed first, their censer will remain on the ground—vulnerable to being shot and exploding in the same manner as when the Ravager was still alive.
 ==Known Ravagers==
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 ==Gallery==
 <gallery>
-File:Ravager.jpg|A Ravager fiercely charging into battle, [[Flame Cauldron]] in-hand.
+File:Ravager.jpg|A Ravager fiercely charging into battle, [[Flame Censer]] in-hand.
 File:Eugene-kim-ek-screenshot-17.jpg|Two Ravagers.
 </gallery>