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 {{quote|They called us unlucky to have been born in the dark of deep space, but we were born free!|Atraks, the Wildcard}}
-Atraks is quiet in nature and respectful to those with authority. She is of few words and optimistic in nature who looks forward to the future. This is due to her youthfulness as she never witnessed the horrors of the [[Whirlwind]].
+Quiet in nature, Atraks was respectful to those with authority. She was of few words and optimistic in nature who looked forward to the future. This trait developed due to her youthfulness as she never witnessed the horrors of the [[Whirlwind]].
-She whole-heartedly believes in [[Eramis]] and passionately tries to recruit her fellow young [[Eliksni]]. She asks them see to the [[Light]], to do away with the dead dreams that have blinded the older generations and views her birth in space as a positive as she was born free and does not have to live by the arbitrary customs that guide the [[Fallen]].
+She whole-heartedly believed in [[Eramis]] and passionately tried to recruit her fellow young [[Eliksni]]. She asked them see to the [[Light]], to do away with the dead dreams that blinded the older generations and viewed her birth in space as a positive as she was born free and did not have to live by the arbitrary customs that guide the [[Fallen]].
-Atraks is highly intelligent as she was able to continue the [[Exo]] research first set in motion by [[Praksis]] and became the first Fallen ever to transform herself to Exo. She bested the likes of [[Sekris]], [[Taniks]], [[Pirrha, the Rifleman|Pirrha]], [[Aksis]] and his [[Devil Splicers]] to become one with technology and achieve a status that would be celebrated as godhood among her kind.
+Atraks demonstrated her high intelligence when she continued the [[Exo]] research first set in motion by [[Praksis]] and became the first Fallen ever to transform herself to Exo. She bested the likes of [[Sekris]], [[Taniks]], [[Pirrha, the Rifleman|Pirrha]], [[Aksis]] and his [[Devil Splicers]] to become one with technology and achieved a status that would be celebrated as godhood among her kind.
-Atraks became the de-facto leader after the fall of her Council members and commands a [[Ketch]] stationed near the [[Morning Star]] space station.
+Following the fall of her fellow Council members, Atraks became the de-facto leader of her leaderless House and commanded a [[Ketch]] stationed near the [[Morning Star]] space station.
-During her transition to Atraks-1, her cognitive mind deteriorated to the point where she suffered early stages of Dissociative Exomind Rejection. To remedy this, an unnamed Fallen tells her to strip the skin off her former face for others to wear and remind herself that her old body was just an imposter to them; its face being nothing other than a [[Mask of Bakris|mask]].
+During her transition to Atraks-1, her cognitive mind deteriorated to the point where she suffered early stages of Dissociative Exomind Rejection. To remedy this, an unnamed Fallen instructed her to strip the skin off her former face for others to wear and remind herself that her old body was just an imposter to them; its face being nothing other than a [[Mask of Bakris|mask]].
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