OmgHAX!'s board-to-board with Arcmind-1

Hello, OmgHAX, i am Arcmind, as i was looking at your wiki page, it made me think about my Video Game, (I am an aspiring Game Dev working on a game called Pyramidion), and after reading what you said about the destiny story progression, I was wondering, if i am not bothering you, if you could please take a look at an entry to my plot timeline and tell me what you think? I hope to one day release this game, and i would hope to please people like yourself, and i can think of no better way to do so than to actually ask one. Either way, if you read this, thank you for your time. Have a good one! :)