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 ==Prelude==
-Before the battle took place, [[Eris Morn]] warned [[Mara Sov|The Queen]] of Oryx's impending threat and in response, the Queen and her forces set their ships on a course for [[Saturn]] to challenge Oryx's armada.
+Prior to the battle, [[Eris Morn]] warned [[Mara Sov|The Queen]] of Oryx's impending threat, prompting the Queen and her forces to set a course for [[Saturn]] in an attempt to challenge Oryx's armada.
 ==The Battle==