User talk:Empathy Kill

Removal of edit
From what I can tell, your edit was removed because it contained second-person writing, which isn't up to our standards. If you would like to re-add the edit and rewrite it to those standards, it will be allowed to stay. We welcome all contributions.-- 12:08, 11 November 2016 (EST)

Suggestions
Hey there. I noticed you've added some content to the Archon's Forge that could use a little tweaking and keep most of it in there. As Spartacus has said, your original contributions did not live up to our standards. I've taken the liberty to add your edits to the Destinypedia:Sandbox along with how I or another user here would have written it. If you need any more advice, or help, myself, Arcmind, or Spartacus will be happy to help. --Dante the Ghost (talk) 13:14, 11 November 2016 (EST)